Antigone Cadmus

Ha ha. DC suburbs got out of school (we can't get anywhere, all the roads are closed). I stayed home all day. ^_^

Hey, Hotaru-Chan! Your name means firefly? Cute. ^_^ Onto the review of your story. First of all, this story has some language in it. You need to rate it accordingly. ...

Hey, Boltageman! You still need to write those reviews- you need four now! Onto the review... The fluff around the hospital made it look old and broken. How does the ...

I was going to go see it... but then my family was like "Ugh, they closed down 395..." They basically made it impossible for people in the DC area to ...

Hey, NYC Girl! Enough of these fluffy "ZOMG THAT WAS AMAZING!" reviews. Here is your real review. Also, it is the rules here on YWS that you review 2 pieces ...

Banned for arresting me for Thought Crime. Who are you, Big Brother?

Oh, thanks. :)

I feel uber-stupid, but what is a beta phase? *blushes*

Continue you it if you want. I find the best thing to do when I have an idea is to simply write. I don't outline or anything. I just start ...

Banned because I don't think getting married at 15 is legal... is it? :shock:

I can't really nit-pick this, since it is a diary. I'm really resisting the urge to tear apart your grammar... Oh well. The only thing I would say is that ...

I am not trying to be rude at all. But the way that you portray the characters is not right. It doesn't have that much detail to go with it. ...

Banned because only 3% of your posts are reviews.

7/10 I didn't click the link! Ha ha!

Yeah, I realize it is only the first part. I would just take out the parts with words such as "popped", "mope", "joint"- anything you can picture being said by ...